Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Is the start of the story ok?

I don't think it's necessary for you to straight out say "oh yeah, and i'm a dragon". I think that it enriches the story if you make people read between the lines. what else would it be? just wondering, like a flying lizard hmm? some people can infer things for themselves. Unless it's a children's book, it wouldn't be needed.

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