Opinion on my story ?

i like it so far your description is pretty good, but it was kind of hard to follow the flip flop between Addison's thoughts and Ricky's thoughts, but i like the omniscient point of view, i really think it works well. for 20 minutes of writing it seems pretty good, the characters seem to be slightly developed and work very well with each other and it is obvious that they have a strong connection from their history, but they dont know that the other feels that way